Words Like Water

Whenever I try writing a character I've never written before, I usually try to do a short drabble to get the feel of that character. A friend wants me to do a Irvine/Squall fic to feed her FF8 addiction:) I think I did pretty well in trying to get the personality down and I think I may use this little bit in the body of the story.

So this is me trying to get a feel for Squall. The next will be me trying to feel Irvine

Please , any feedback would be appreciated:)