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posted by [identity profile] aoi-aka.livejournal.com at 09:57pm on 11/11/2007
I held my breath for far too long during this whole chapter. It drives me crazy that Tezuka didn't finish what he was gonna say. And why did he grab Fuji for? Was he going to kiss him?! Was he just gonna drown in those eyes and grovel for forgiveness?

I was right in my assessment from the last chapter. Amy did resemble Fuji but only because Tezuka made it that way. He was afraid of non-normality and instead he got heartache, regret, a dead wife and a beautiful daughter. I wonder if Fuji would melt if he met Hana-chan or give her the cold shoulder knowing that she also came from Amy. This was a good chapter!

Thank you so much.

*loves new edit button on comments*

I forgot to mention the boyfriend! OMG! Just where did he crawl out from?! Fuji could've done much better but it's understandable that a shiny package doesn't really show everything and now he's with his a-hole. I hope he dumps him really quickl. XD
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posted by [identity profile] sarcasticcinder.livejournal.com at 04:06pm on 12/11/2007
Thanks for such a positive reaction on a chapter that kicked my ass.

I'm glad the subtlety of this fic is coming through. I don't want to just come out and say "Amy=Fuji" to Tezuka, but I want the readers to draw their own conclusions as to what's truly going on beneath the layers.

Matsura...yeah, he actually started out as a nice guy, and then the muses took over once I started writing this chapter...next thing you know, BAM!!!! Creep!Matsura.
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