Wow! First of all thanks for reading and commenting, especially since I really love your fics:)
I appreciate the honesty of your critique and you have me thinking of going through and editing the point you brought up in regards to Fuji's anger. I understand completely what you're saying and, you're right; even in this fic where the characters are purposely written as OOC to emphasize the passage of years, Fuji's reaction is jarring.
I can honestly say that I was having hard time writing that scene because there was so much pertinent information that I wanted to reveal without it seeming contrived and I guess it back fired on me:)
Matsura...I was hesitant at first about putting Fuji in an abusive relationship based on the fact that there are so many fics out with that premise, and having Fuji fall into one accidentally just doesn't fit with what we know about the tensai.
Thanks again for both the kind words and the concrit. I only hope that I can live up to the expectations you have in regards to the rest of the story.
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I appreciate the honesty of your critique and you have me thinking of going through and editing the point you brought up in regards to Fuji's anger. I understand completely what you're saying and, you're right; even in this fic where the characters are purposely written as OOC to emphasize the passage of years, Fuji's reaction is jarring.
I can honestly say that I was having hard time writing that scene because there was so much pertinent information that I wanted to reveal without it seeming contrived and I guess it back fired on me:)
Matsura...I was hesitant at first about putting Fuji in an abusive relationship based on the fact that there are so many fics out with that premise, and having Fuji fall into one accidentally just doesn't fit with what we know about the tensai.
Thanks again for both the kind words and the concrit. I only hope that I can live up to the expectations you have in regards to the rest of the story.
Cheers!